Kaleidoscope
Rotating the tubes,
brand new shapes take formation,
point it at the light.
Old Radio
Yellowing with age,
and temperamental old knobs,
it still works the same.
Wind
Brushing my brown hair,
a warm and comfortable breeze,
swept away all my sorrows.
Ice Skating
Carving sheets of ice,
two blades creating pictures,
till they melt away.
Clocks
Arms passing each other,
day after long daunting day,
trying to keep up.
Rotating the tubes,
brand new shapes take formation,
point it at the light.
Old Radio
Yellowing with age,
and temperamental old knobs,
it still works the same.
Wind
Brushing my brown hair,
a warm and comfortable breeze,
swept away all my sorrows.
Ice Skating
Carving sheets of ice,
two blades creating pictures,
till they melt away.
Clocks
Arms passing each other,
day after long daunting day,
trying to keep up.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sv6dMFF_yts&ob=av2e listen to me.
ReplyDeleteThe way you wrote it, they kept the meaning to the title and what they actually are. I like the imagery you create, for example, 'Ice Skating' carving sheets of ice, and two blades creating pictures, it really captures ice skating. In 'Wind' I like how you said "swept away all my sorrows." Out of all of them, my favorite is Ice Skating. They are all great though! :)
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